Comments on: Untitled Project 1 http://mastercyclon.edublogs.org Enduring freedom one post at a time. Tue, 09 Jun 2009 20:04:57 -0400 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.8.2 hourly 1 By: wolfdreamer http://mastercyclon.edublogs.org/untitled-project-1/comment-page-1/#comment-76 wolfdreamer Thu, 31 Jul 2008 02:10:36 +0000 http://mastercyclon.edublogs.org/untitled-project-1/#comment-76 You've chosen a very difficult and challenging way to tell a story and I think that's awesome. Once this is finished, I'll make some suggestions on how to clean it up. So far, it's a very creative work, just at times would be a little confusing to the average reader. I do this a lot to, I write to the kind of reader that I know I am and that's not a bad thing. Just remember that if you want others to like your writing, you have to cater to them just enough that they can get the story. Elmore Leonard (along with many other great authors) says that it's not about the writer; it's about the story. With my inflated ego, I struggle with that all the time. Keep it up. I'm looking forward to reading more. By the way, you can read Leonard's useful advice here: http://query.nytimes.com/gst/fullpage.html?res=940CE3DD103BF935A25754C0A9679C8B63 Hope this helps. Good to hear from you. You’ve chosen a very difficult and challenging way to tell a story and I think that’s awesome. Once this is finished, I’ll make some suggestions on how to clean it up. So far, it’s a very creative work, just at times would be a little confusing to the average reader.

I do this a lot to, I write to the kind of reader that I know I am and that’s not a bad thing. Just remember that if you want others to like your writing, you have to cater to them just enough that they can get the story. Elmore Leonard (along with many other great authors) says that it’s not about the writer; it’s about the story. With my inflated ego, I struggle with that all the time.

Keep it up. I’m looking forward to reading more.

By the way, you can read Leonard’s useful advice here:

http://query.nytimes.com/gst/fullpage.html?res=940CE3DD103BF935A25754C0A9679C8B63

Hope this helps. Good to hear from you.

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